Angel of Death

Breathe In Ok, ok this was really intense. I felt that I was rushed into a world of slipping and falling; confusion. Sometimes this would be bad but here its ...

Hey BBB!!! I have to make reading some of your work apart of my daily schedule because its like going to the movies! I love watching thrillers and mysteries, where ...

Wow this was wonderful. You captured so many emotions about change and it had rhythm, and perfect structure. I loved this. Now I know this is not much but this ...

This was really beautiful. The emotions that you portrayed were real and refreshing. It read easily, almost like a sea-birthed poem on a gloomy day. Honestly I can't stop smiling. ...

OMG!! I'm crying. This was so beautiful and the way you've written this kept me hooked to the end. I felt that you captured behind the picture very well. Some ...

I really like this but I don't have anything to complain about. This was beautiful yet the humor painted the right thoughts, which I never seem to find in some ...

Wow! I really loved this part of the story, I hope you continue writing. Your descriptions were flawless, it almost makes me feel like I was really there. Umm...I don't ...

This was weird but it was good. Um you certainly have the rhyming down and the story is a bit...understandable. Only its the last stanza that is bothering me. Now ...

Hey BBB!! Thanks for PMing me because yay, I'm the first to post. Ok I only got to read half of this but I'll be back I promise. I didn't ...

You may not think this was your best work but this was good. The message in there was kinda sweet. After death, love is eternal, nothing can render or break ...

Wow, this was intense. I felt the emotion, the I don't know what to call it. It just was and that's hope poems should be. It wasn't traditional it just ...

I will read over the first two later but I thought these two parts were an improvement. I felt the emotions that Safira felt and the way you described her ...

Compliments to the Writer This was beautifully written and I hope you continue it. Words oh where are thy Words Your vocabulary is very beautiful and the figurative language you ...

Beginning The beginning should be labeled as a prologue because it has a prologue feel. We don't know the characters and it would only be right if that was made ...

OMG!! This was really beautiful :cry: I haven't read any of your poetry in a long time but my theory still remains true: You are a great poet, almost like ...